The candidate is clearly clients-oriented and we feel it!

Brief is always best. While you may have been the best fry cook during your times working for a restaurant in high school, it's time to get rid of the clutter that is not related to your present job search objective. Give more space for details about your current or recent job and less about the past. If it doesn't fit in one two pages—it's not worth writing about! Make sure to write down specific skills and tasks that are relevant to the job you're applying to, even if it means adjusting your resume for each new application.